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Physically and emotionally, he has no qualms about forcing Fujiwara. Unfortunely, as a reader I still feel he was too good for Kaitani who is a manipulative ununderstanding jerk most of the series.Overall, the seme still remains a jerk, but there is room for improvement as he comes to an ephiphany of how awful his personality has been. A vast improvement over the first volume where I couldn't stand the narrator Kaitani. Like one reviewer mentioned, I did have trouble w/ Fujiwara being forced to have sex then suddenly enjoying being the uke w/o any tranistion between that emotion.Similar to how I felt about Fujiwara in the first volume, he's a wonderful gentleman who is a very understanding helpfull boss. I enjoyed and would probably recommend this series as there really aren't that many English translated yaoi novels on the market. In this volume, he shows his slightly redeemable side by making some efforts to change for the better and trying to understand Fujiwara. However, this is only done after he pressures Fujiwara in a reprehensible way.
It was just a really good and swift read. But in book two I cried. The Man Who Doesn't Take Off His Clothes, is fantastic. Sure there are some grammar and spelling errors in these novles but if you can look past that, the story is worth reading. but in book one I couldn't put it down nor stop laughing even while I was rooting for Fujiwara's take down. I really really enjoyed this book.
Great characters and awesome build up of tensions and attractions. My heart strings were plucked. and its sequel and though things get wrapped up in book two, I still yearn for a book three. By book two I fell in love with these books, I even fell in love with Fujiwara which I have to say was hard to do in book one. five stars, two thumbs up. I felt this series was in a class with S by Saki Aida and the Guilty by Katsura Izumi.
In book two it turns really awesome.
Sure he doesn't mean to harm but the poor uke kept on putting up with his constant harassments. Sometimes while reading, i think our seme is quite a selfish bastard. Overall i enjoyed the series, the author should write another follow up to this novel. the story continues from where the previous novel left us. The connection between the seme and uke is somewhat a bitter sweet one.
A good read. I wasn't sure about this story in Vol. 1 but have really gotten into it now.
And Fujiwara still comes back to him. Even that girl that Kaitani had a crush on in volume 1 was reintroduced as a more reasonable person now that Kaitani didn't monopolize our perception of the situation. On the other hand there are numerous points of contention that I cannot let alone.First, and again I have to reprimand DMP for their un-proofed manuscripts, was the translation. Yuki Shimizu (of Love Mode) does the illustrations yet again for Konohara's novel, but again they are so few and far between and most of them (aside from one racy image in the middle to keep us interested and one "heartwarming" one at the end) are pretty uninteresting. Yet another thing I had a problem with was the baffling fact that Fujiwara enjoys the physical act. I actually sat there and thought, "because I didn't do anything to stop this before now I have enabled this terrible thing to happen to Fujiwara at the hands of this jerk." It's a book. I don't want to spoil anything so I can't get into details, but I felt dirty. She isn't flowery/poetic like Kannagi in Only the Ring Finger Knows (which has its own charms, don't get me wrong) and her characters are mature adult men with other life problems outside their interest in each other.
I have to wonder. At first it was comical, but in volume 2 it seems to have taken on a darker edge. I warn about the frustrating aspects, but I also encourage the objective eye one can use in seeing through the dirt to find the gold. Fujiwara finally trusts Kaitani, one of his first male friends ever, and Kaitani shatters that trust because he isn't getting what he wants right away.
I felt like an enabler who got in too deep as I watched the act of betrayal and selfishness Kaitani subjects Fujiwara to in the middle of the book (even when I saw it coming). I find typoes in BeBeautiful titles, but it's like one or two in the whole volume, not on each page. I just wish Konohara had actually spent more than a paragraph establishing how that happened from his perspective. In all I would recommend this continuation of the story if you have liked the Don't Worry Mama series up to this point.
Where does this come from. I wouldn't start with this volume though, I'd start with the first Don't Worry Mama book. On the one hand I like Konohara's style. It's not too much of a spoiler to tell you that Kaitani forces a physical relationship on Fujiwara, but Fujiwara, while being forced bottom to a man, actually and mysteriously suddenly is revealed to enjoy the relationship. I want to see the build-up, like the rest of the story is carefully built up, not thrown in instead of drawn out to make the book fit the page count. Anyway, setting my continuing frustration with DMP aside, there are problems I also have with the work itself.Volume 1 set the story up from Kaitani's perspective that Fujiwara was an uptight jerk and we should not only sympathize with his plight, but cheer him on as he performs horrible act of "revenge" upon horrible act of "revenge" on his boss. They start sleeping together in the volume and we all see that coming, but suddenly a month has passed and Fujiwara is not only used to it, but is enjoying it. There are so many issues that have yet to be resolved between the characters, particularly as it concerns Fujiwara's unfathomable interest in Kaitani in the first place.
I actually enjoy the slow build-up of her storylines, only intruducing the yaoi themes when the time is right. Not only has the question arisen of whether or not Fujiwara remembers what happened to him at the end of volume 1, or whether Kaitani has any interest in exposing the truth, but also of how Fujiwara's perception of the other man might change as a result of finding out. For example, Higashiyama turns out to have become the equivalent of an old coot about relationships when he tells Kaitani to not act on his feelings, and it takes Tomoharu of all people to give Kaitani motivation. At the end of the book, Konohara mentions in the afterward that the story has "for now" come to a conclusion, but the story is so open-ended that I have to wonder if this really will be the case. Why did Konohara skip ahead of the story like this. Konohara has a way with words and I recommend giving her a chance. It's as if, as Kaitani's hold on the reader's preception is stripped away, we get to see totally new sides of old characters.
DMP might be the yaoi publisher with the biggest library of titles to offer, but they are also the biggest corner cutters when it comes to proofing their translations (in both manga and novels, novels are just longer so I guess they don't even bother to do "all that work"). I guess I should credit Konohara for making me feel such strong enotions about her characters, but is it really that she wants us to dislike her hero. There are so many directions that could be gone with the storyline (as there were with Don't Worry Mama as well), but I don't know if we'll ever see anything of it. The awkwardness of the OtRFK series of novels is nowhere near being approached (Kelly Quine did the translation again and the work is comparable to before), but there are so many simple typographic errors throughout the book that could have easily been corrected had they had an actual, professional, editor on staff to read the thing. She left out a huge development of character motivation and I for one, refuse to just "accept" that this is how Fujiwara feels. A number of the characters come off differently in this volume. Unfortunately for Kaitani, the jig is up in volume 2 and Fujiwara is reavealed to in fact be a very reasonable man and we the readers are not only left with a sense of dissatisfaction with Kaitani over his continuous childish and selfish behavior, but also one of dissatisfaction with ourselves for going along with him up until now.
I have no influence on what happens.
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